Thursday, April 9, 2009

a poem?

aRt by Natasha P.
"If I were to write and never end
I could never tell you the pain I've felt,
the hunger I've had
the love I've lost and spent.

If I were to sing and never stop
the world would spin on my fingertips
as I tried to explain you and me.

If I were to paint a single picture
of what my heart looks like
your eyes your lips your ears your nose
would take the shape of every stroke.

My art is my life my life is nothing
but words, songs and pictures
but they'd be nothing
without the words I've read
from fantasy to scripture.

I'll try to write, paint and sing
but without you my love they will cease to mean a thing."




tell me what you think I need some feedback even if its bad and yes i realize there is no sign of a rhyme scheme thi sis much more freee flowing. :)

1 comment:

  1. This is beautiful, Tata! I didn't know you wrote poetry too. How are the stories coming along?

    Oh, and you weren't on AIM when I finally was today :(

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